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Title: HOUSE OF SIN - The Diary of Uke Yutaka
Chapters: ??/??
Author: [info]luna_no_koibito
Genre: Human drama, romance, war, angst.
Warnings:  men/men relationship, cursing, sex, violence, incest.
Rating:
from PG -15 to NC-17 (Depending on chapter)
Pairing: Revealing this might spoil the story just yet ... suggest looking at the character list (^_^)!
Bands: the GazettE, Dir En Grey, X-Japan, Nightmare, An Cafe', Alice Nine, Kra, SuG.
Disclaimer: I don't own them, and don't wish I did because I'd be sorry for what could befall them (・_・;)!
Summary: Synopsis )

 MAIN

PROLOGUE PART 1
 

-Yutaka! - yelled a voice ahead of him. The apprentice looked up and found Dr. Niikura running towards him

 

-I was so worried! I really didn't think you wouldn't have made it to the restaurant, if I had known-

 

-Could we please go to our hostel, I suddenly don't seem to feel very well … - asked the younger, who hadn't heard a word the elder had just uttered.

 

-What's wrong? Everything- tried to inquire the elder

 

-It's nothing, I guess it's just tiredness – quickly replied the younger.

 

-No problems, I guess I will eat something at the hostel – reassured the elder as he showed their way to their destination.

 

 

When they arrived to their destination, two young men took their belongings and escorted them to their separate rooms. The boy that had followed Yutaka was still standing at the entrance of his room, awaiting for the brunette to express any concerns or inquiries, but the latter hadn't seem to have acknowledge his presence.

 

-Excuse me sir, may I take my leave? - hesitantly asked brown haired boy, and as if he suddenly snapped out of his hypnosis, he looked at the assistant with a bewildered expression, finally noticing his presence.

 

-My name is Miku, if you need anything please just ask me – spoke the assistant with a warm smile

 

-Thank you, Miku, but I will be okay for tonight – the boy bowed, smiled once more, and exited the room, closing the door.

 

The apprentice had dropped on the single bed in front of him. He his mind, he relived bits and pieces of the his first experience in the great city. A most dreadful experience at that, and he couldn't quite get over it, and it wasn't much the fact that his life was being at risk the whole period he had unwillingly been in company of the blonde, what had really left an impact were those eyes. He never thought it possible for a human being to be able to display such anger, with such intensity, with such palpable intention of wanting so desperately to hurt someone ... over a spilled beer?

 

He got up from the bed feeling a sudden thirst, and went downstairs, towards the desk, as he arrived he found the young Miku smiling at him from behind the front desk.

 

-I guess I lied after all ... I do need something – spoke the brunette whit an innocent smile

 

-Sure, what can I get for you sir? -

 

-maybe just a glass of water, please – replied Yutaka, almost looking apologetic. Miku went behind a back door, which most have taken to the kitchen, and came back with a glass of water. He gave it to the brunette, and stayed intensely observing the other while he slowly drank.

 

Feeling the gaze of the boy on him, the brunette slowly turned towards the brown haired assistant, while still drinking.

-Anything the matter? - he then inquired, as he placed the empty glass on the desk

 

-No sir, you just … look like you must have come from very far away – shyly answered the assistant

 

-In fact I did. I come from Inverness, Scotland. - proudly replied Yutaka

 

-And you are a businessman? … That is, If you don't mind me asking – attempted the young assistant

 

-I am an apprentice doctor, I am directed to Bexley to help an illustrious family – stated Yukata, assuming an even higher air of importance.

 

-illustrous … Bexley … might you be referring to … the Hayashi's?- cautiously spoke Miku

 

-Y-yes … are they that popular? - asked the brunette taking aback by the immediate identification. The other slowly nodded, as the smile on his face disappeared, quickly giving space to a rather concerned expression.

 

-There are … bad rumors … about that family … - shyly said the young boy, not looking the other in the eyes, as the brunette unknowingly made himself closer to the assistant, wanting to know more. The assistant quickly glanced up at the brunette, and after a few second, and a deep sigh he resumed talking.

 

-Strange dealings seem to be going on in that house, because of which, people renamed it the house of the sinisters, now simply known as the house of sin. - explained the other

 

-What exactly do you mean by … strange dealings? - quickly asked Yutaka, as he inadvertently got even closer to the young assistant.

 

-Rumor has it, that the second son, Takahiro, goes out every night and kills somebody, for the youngest of them, Takeru, so that he can bath in the victims blood. - concluded Miku nodding his head as if to make his statement more truthful by doing so, at which the brunette smirked, and gave him a skeptical look.

 

-If that were to be true, the population in Bexley would suffer some drastic changes in number, don't you agree? - asked the brunette, not receiving any answer from Miku, who just shrugged, as he brought the glass to the back.

 

-Well said Yutaka! - said the voice of Dr. Niikura, who came to seat next to him

 

-I am not the type to follow gossip – readily replied the younger, at which the elder replied with a laughter, and then spoke

 

-But you know, what they say, there is always a fond of truth to every gossip ...- Yutaka chuckled and turned to face Miku, who had come back, and now was unmoving staring at the entrance, with an aghast expression.

 

-T-the Ha-hayashi … - he stuttered, as Yutaka and Dr. Niikura quickly turned towards the entrance

 

-They are indeed … - replied Dr. Niikura as he got up, and calmly walked to the entrance.

 

-Am I looking at the once very rebellious little mister Yasuno? - asked Dr. Niikura stopping right in front of the three guests, who had just entered the hostel

 

-Yes … and ...Dear Lord! Dr. Niikura?- attempted the tall blonde man

 

-Yes, in flesh and bones!- joyfully replied the elder

 

-What a surprise, though, we weren't expecting you until tomorrow morning I am afraid … - apologized the elder blonde

 

-We know, we are going to leave tomorrow in fact – explained the elder brunette

 

-We? … - hesitantly asked Yasuno, at which the elder brunette turned towards the still sitting figure at the desk, motioning him to come over.Yutaka slowly moved from his chair and nervously walked towards the elder brunette.

 

-This is Uke Yutaka, he is the one who is going to help you with Kazamasa's problem – the younger brunette bowed, and the other three followed suit.

 

-This is Hayashi's elder son, Yasuno, and this young man ... most be the last born, Takeru, if I am not mistaken. The last time I saw you, you were crawling, all over the place. - laughed the eldest

 

-I most certainly am, and unfortunately I do not recall any memories of you sir, but I really hope we can get to catch up on lost time, and of course – paused the youngest turning towards Yutaka - thank you for offering to help us, Mister Uke – replied the younger blonde, as he bowed at both brunettes.

 

Yutaka was still astonished by both men abnormally handsome features, that he almost forgot to bow back, and something about the younger one, Takeru, almost made him look … womanly beautiful. Both men carried themselves with a lot of self importance, yet keeping an air of modesty, making them look like perfect gentlemen. Yasuno was wearing a black suit with a white shirt, whereas Takeru, was wearing a gray suit, with a black shirt, and a gray matching hat, his blonde locks longer than his elder brother's.

 

-And the young lady may be? … - asked Dr Niikura looking at the third member of the Hayashi party

 

-This is my fiance', miss Iida Ayaka – replied Yasuno, at which the young lady merely smiled and bowed. -Well ... we would like to stay and converse some more, but we just got back from a business trip, besides, we'll have more time to converse from tomorrow, isn't it? ... How about we all leave together – proposed Yasuno

 

-Sound good to me – replied Dr. Niikura receiving a positive nod in agreement from Yutaka.

 

-Well then it is decided. Now, If you would excuse us – the three bowed once more, and left the brunettes' sight.

 

Yutaka was glad he had had a chance to already meet some members of the so notorious family, now he felt relaxed. They seemed like highly civilized and respectable people, which made the rumors he had just heard, sound like obvious lies formulated by the mind of plain jealous spectators. His experience in England was going to be as good as he had first envisioned after all, and deciding to forget the incident with the blond nose strapped man, he proceeded towards his room, to get some good deserved sleep, fervently awaiting for the following day.

 

888 --- *** --- 888

 

-UhhYasuno, … Nn, harder … - requested the panting voice of a boy, in one of the hostel rooms. The man on top of him gladly complied, and increased the intensity of his thrusts, slowly pounded his fully hardened length into the young demanding body, as he caressed away some untidy blond locks sticking on the younger one's sweaty forehead, he then lowered himself to the young ear and whispered in a playful tone

 

-Don't be too loud Takeru… - and slowly traced the shape of the earlobe with the tip of his tong, causing a series of enthralled moans from the younger, as he gave it light nibbles, while increasing the speed of his thrusts. The elder then ceased all his movements, making the other pout and grumble in disappointment at the sudden lost of pleasure. The elder looked straight in the awaiting eyes of the blonde beneath him, and leaned closer, hovering over slightly parted lips.

 

-You acted so mature and composed today … I am proud – whispered Yasuno, bringing their lips together, and eagerly making his tongue slip trough to the tiny passage in the younger one's lips, fervently playing with the other awaiting tongue. The kiss became sloppier and more needy, as their passion steadily increased in between roughly fast touching tongues, and pleasure filled moans. The younger won control over the frenzied kiss, and bit on the elder's lower lip, which didn't bled, but it was hard enough to cause the produce a shiver, in a mixture of pain and delight, in the elder's spine, who separated their lips, and slowly moved to the younger's neck, eagerly sucking on the exposed sweaty skin.

 

-Uhhah .. Yasuno … don't leave any visib – tried to say the younger, but his voice was suffocated by a series of moans leaving his parted lips as the elder resumed his merciless pounding into his body. The elder stopped his thrust once more, feeling the younger coming close to his climax, and enjoying the distressed face on his younger brother. He then lowered on a hardened nipple and bit it

-Arg! that hurts Yasuno- mumbled Takeru, the other just smirked.

 

- pervert ... - mockingly retorted the younger

 

- … sluth- replied the elder as the other giggled wrapping his arms behind the elder's neck, while he got closer to the other' ear and said in a demanding sensual whisper.

 

-Say you love me– the elder, didn't move for some second, then he freed himself from the other embrace. He pulled up fixing their stares on each other, placed his hands on Takeru's shoulder and sensually guided them down through the younger's arms, reaching stopping at his wrist, which he forcefully grabbed and slammed over the boys head. He then grinned, and as he tightly kept the grip on the younger's wrist, he pounded inside the younger with one strong thrust. The younger, moved his head to the side with a loud groan, while his back arched at the gratifying sensation of his prostate being hit. He swiftly turned to face his elder brother again, with semi closed eyelids and incessant panting, demanding his request once more

 

-S-say … you love me- the elder slowly pulled his length stopping right at the used entrance of the younger, and with no admonition, he quickly pounded into the younger blonde's sweet spot over and over again, as the other lost rational sensing, abandoning his quivering body in the overwhelming pleasure. Bringing them both to a sitting position, without pulling out from the younger, he order the younger to move, who frenziedly began impaling himself on the elder's length, feeling both bodies very close to their release, as the elder pumped his length following the rhythm of his hips.

 

-Aah! … - shouted Takeru, spilling his seed over the elder, as he slumped on his chest. The tightly clenching muscles of the younger's entrance, made the older soon follow in suit, as he spilled his seed into the heavy breathing body on top of him, as they fell back on the bed on top of each other.

 

-Why don't you ever tell me that? … - asked Takeru as he recollected his breath

 

-I just did … -smirked the other, as he caressed the younger's head

 

-I want words! - demanded the younger

 

-Since when have become so sentimental? … is not like your not going to give it to me anyway – playfully retorted the other.

 

-Still … - replied the other, as he wrapped his arms around the elder's waist, who did the same. The stayed silent in each others arms, as the elder stroke the younger's hair, when he suddenly inquired

-… how long do you think, our apprentice is going to last? -

 

-I don't know … how long are guys going to make him last? - teased the elder

 

-Are you not going to help? - curiously asked the younger blonde

 

-I'd feel sorry for him … he looks like such a cutie- replied the elder, who received a disapproval smack on his chest, by the other blonde.

 

-I don't like him ...- added the still offended blonde

 

-Well I guess, he is going fast then ...- replied the other as he kindly pulled himself out of the embrace, attempting to leave the bed, but held by the wrist by the other lying body.

 

-Stay … - requested the younger, with hopeful eyes, knowing that his pleas were going to be nevertheless all in vain.

 

-You know I can't – replied the elder as he leaned to kiss the other on the forehead – now, be a good boy and catch some sleep – he then freed himself from the grip, walked towards the other side of the double bed, grabbing the end of the bed sheets, an cleaning his chest of the other's fluid, as much as he could, and successively wore his clothes.

 

-Good night Takeru – he said as he blew out the candle on the side table

 

-Good night … - replied the other with a yawn, as he turned into his cover.

 

The elder then sneaked out the room with the familiar spent body of his youngest brother, directing himself to the room of the never been touched sleeping body of his fiance. On his way to the room, he briefly stopped in front of the closed door of their future medical apprentice, he leaned his ear on the door, but could hear no sounds. He was about to open the door and let himself in, but decided against it, for the moment. He then simply smirked in anticipation of the fun days that were about to take place, and resumed his walk towards his room, as he mentally welcomed the sleeping brunette, in their House of Sin.



CHAPTER 1 PART 1



A/N: sorry for the hurry but as I said I have a little situation in my hands. SORRY! I will write the next chapter with more cure and dedication, I just need to put the prologue out there, to make the synopsis a little clearer. Thanks for you consideration, and hope you'll be waiting for the first chapter ... it is going to be an interesting ride! (=^_^=)!

 

Comments

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[info]kawasakininja wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 03:13 pm (UTC)
I admit I haven't read anything like this before, setting in 18th century England seems unusual. It kind of gives a certain atmosphere person might associate with that era. Kind of drab, dark, spooky? House of Sin certainly doesn't help to change my feelings about it. I am not really that familiar with that era, but I like how you tried to help us picture the setting with little details. I am not sure if they are correct, so I have to take your word for it. Anyway, Reita he is Wrath, right? Kai's encounter with him certainly seemed like that. I liked his characterization very much, fitting for a nickname. I laughed at the dogs names. Other two brothers I liked how they had their polished pleasing front for Kai and Kaoru and were totally devious when left to their own devices. Porn really surprised me. I've read the incest warning, but still first chapter porn :))) I didn't mind it, but at moments it seemed somewhat skippy, like suddenly skipping in moments. Poor Kai is lulled into false sense of security. I find it amusing. It does seem like there will be a lot in store for him at the House of Sin. I really don't know what to think about that. I'll just have to wait and see.
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 06:26 pm (UTC)
And finally the moment I have been waiting for, coming back home! REPLYING TO YOUR AMAZING AND MOST APPRECIATED COMMENT.

I am glad that you are exactly getting the vibe of the story, which it had been a bit heard to represent because of the setting, but I am really trying my best to be loyal (I may not be always, unfortunately!).

I ma sorry if I startled you with that "graphic" scene, but I needed for the reader to understand exactly what we are dealing with at the beginning of the story, to understand the meaning of the different progressions, And yes I ADMIT the last part of the prologue was A LOT skippie, for I really hurried it up, wanting so bad to post it, but it shall not repeat again, I'll give TIME to TIME (^_^)

I am glad you found funny parts in it, for it weren't meant to be all gloomy, and yes Kai is going in for a "Hell" of a ride!

Thank you again, SO much for commenting, I am at the beginning of this "career" (LOL), and I need this type of comments to improve. *hugs and kisses* (Hope to live up to your expectations!)
[info]eglinton_w wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 07:08 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much. Such a great start. Never thought that JRock and 18th century England could blend so well. I like the atmosphere of the story. It has this dark and mysterious feeling but at the same time it’s also has some kind of sadistic playful element.

Kai seems so innocent, I’m afraid that the Hayashi family is going to eat him alive. And the scene with dogs was really funny. Also I was surprised with secondary characters ^_^

You wrote in character introduction that Takeru has a good relationship with his oldest brother. So when you came with sex episode I was a little bit surprised. It was a really intense scene. I wonder what his fiancée thinks about their relationship. I like how Yasuno act in this scene. At first I thought that he’s going to be cold as ice but I like that he act warmer with his brother. I think this makes him more humane.

Can’t wait for new chapters )))
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 07:22 pm (UTC)
WOW! Thank you sooooo much!

I really was a bit worried at the begining about the whole 18th century thing. As a reader, I like to immerse myself in many different times and settings, and this one sounded appropriate for this story, but I didn't know how people would react to it. Thus, I am very pleased with you reaction, thanks.

Yeah, Yasuno's and Takeru's relationship is a little complex ... but at this stage I don't want to say more (^_^), hopefully it will slowly unfold in the right way!

Poor Kai indeed, but we shall see that too!

There are going to be secondary characters all over the place, just to make it look like there are actually other people that the reader my connect with, even if just for one line (like guest stars, and such...LOL!)

Thank you so much for commenting again, I really appreciate it *hugs and kisses*
[info]yutakai wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 08:11 pm (UTC)
Wow...just wow...thank you very much for this prologue.
You exceed all my expectations XD
I think I Just fell for this story.
I love the idea that you started the whole thing with the diary entry.
And the whole scenario is so different from everything I read before and that makes it special ^^

The Hayashi family seems like a bunch of interesting people...
Sinisters...seems to fit well.
I liked the first appearance of Reita. And I was laughing so much when he said the names of the dogs. I didn't expected that *lol*

Your style of writing is really good. One can read it fluently.
Stay that way ^^

and I'm really excited which sin Kai is gonna fall for ^-^
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 08:42 pm (UTC)
You are OH so very welcome, mylady LOL *tries to snap out of the 18th century*
I am glad you seem to be liking the story, that makes me very very happy, and ecstatic.

Yeah the Hayashi family are really interesting, and they have their good and bad reasons to be so.
I thought so hard about what names to give them, and in the end, I thought about the character of the actual people, and it seemed to fit pretty nicely.

You don't know how happy I am to hear this, I do feel like i am improving day by day (english not being my first language) and to hear somebody say that is just an amazing feeling.

Yeah, which one is it ... ... (ーw-;) ... guess we are just going to wait and find out. *hugs and kisses*
[info]xnaixnaix wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 08:41 am (UTC)
Wow it seemed more like a first chapter than an prologue to me and it was so long *3*
i love it when you have so much to read and i hope it will be the same with your actual chapters? +puppy eyes+

Even so i felt a bit weird when i readed sagas and toras names for the dogs!!! i didnt expected that! XD
And even Kyo got a little role in there!

Yay~ this really seems like the story will be very interesting and a lot of fun hrhr <3

Can't wait to read more ^^
+gives cookie+
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 06:42 pm (UTC)
LOL! I think it's my will to portray to the reader exactly what's on my mind, so I had to get you ready for the situation and setting, and when I write, sometimes it just keeps coming (I apologize for the length!)

AHAHAHAHAH I think Saga and Tora have just officially became V.I.P. dogs ... I'll make sure to give them a special treatment (-_^)!

Thank you a lot for the compliments, and I'll work hard to keep it as interesting as possible
*hugs and kisses*
[info]xnaixnaix wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 06:46 pm (UTC)
no no noooo dont apologize i loved the length of it!!*3*
it just ddnt felt like a prologue but thats fine!

and yes do that i hope they'll appear again from time to time =D
+pets tora-dog and saga-dog+
[info]aubrey_skylee wrote:
Jun. 27th, 2009 10:03 pm (UTC)
Oh this is amazing, and it's only the prolouge! I was excited when I saw this when I woke up, because it kept coming to mind yesterday. I'm an impatient person when I want to read a new story.

First, this story so far is different from a lot of things I've read. I think it's because of the setting. There's not many stories out there taking place in a different time period, and definitely not ones that take place outside of Japan. I really like this idea.

And Reita! He actually startled me for a moment when he showed up. I seriously thought he was going to hurt Kai or send the dogs after him. (Still giggling about Saga and Tora as dogs.) I'm curious to see how things go with him.

The last scene was probably my favorite here. I was surprised by it at first, but it was really intense, and it definitely makes me wonder about the relationships between the rest of the family. (And after reading up on the characters beforehand, I'm especially curious to know about Takanori since Kai mentioned him.)

And random Kyo made me happy. I think because Kyo/Kai is my crack pairing. So just having him there made me giggle.

I apologize if my comments were all over the place. I tend to jump around a lot. This was a great start to what I'm sure will be an amazing story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 01:05 am (UTC)
I am so glad that I was able to entertain you on so many levels!! I am shocked at myself too. This is going to be a very fun, and in some bits hard fiction to write, so I pray for the best ;)

As for the comments, don't worry, it actually helps me a lot if you share with me all your random thoughts, it helps me understand how much of what I am writing is actually being understand. Thus, your comments were fantastic.

I couldn't think of anybody else to fit the role of the Lord, other than Kyo, he just seemed to suit it perfectly (compared to the dogs, which took me a while ...LOL!)

So I thank you once more for reading, and give you *huds and kisses*
[info]mesti wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 12:52 pm (UTC)
tis fic is so...dark and intense <3 i'm really interested, and i cannot wait for the next chapter ^_^

please update soon m(_ _)m
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 06:44 pm (UTC)
AHahahaa ... I have always thought of 18th century England as such a dark place too.

I'll try to upload as soon as I can, and hope to keep you entertained as well.

Thank you for commenting *hugs and kisses*
[info]k435y wrote:
Jun. 28th, 2009 10:28 pm (UTC)
Miku is adorable. =D

Y-yes … are they that popular? I wouldn't say popular...more like they're notorious for being dysfunctional. XD

Rumor has it, that the second son, Takahiro, goes out every night and kills somebody, for the youngest of them, Takeru, so that he can bath in the victims blood. LOL! For some reason, I just pictured Takeru happily bathing in a bath of redness. And if that were true, then wouldn't there be a very, very, very long list of missing persons? XD I love the eager imagination of humans.

Huh. Yasuno and Takeru, huh? =/ Ah~ My innocent little pervert's been willingly stained by the very, very tall goofball! XP ...I feel sorry for Ayaka. =/ What was she thinking getting engaged to one of the kids from the House of Sin anyway?! =X

And...they drive away medical assistants/doctors/whatevers? XD Why would they do that? Don't they want to know if Shou can be helped? LOL. Naughty kids.

Please update soon!
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jun. 29th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
AHAHAHAHHAHAHAAH. I really really really loved your analysis. Many points that I wanted to make sound absurd, you caught on, FANTASTIC! I am glad

There will be explanations for all they actions, and I am afraid the Hayashi family, is a very troubled family ...

But we shall see how it will proceed, right?

Thank you for commenting, I really appreciate it *hugs and kisses*
[info]pooobaihr wrote:
Jul. 4th, 2009 09:26 pm (UTC)
I have finally made it to this story.. xD.. (while I take a small break from my own) xDDD..
This is good so far... I like How Yutaka seems a little.. naive.. though I know he isnt..

I had a feeling there was something between Yasuno and Takeru had a thing going on together.. XDDDDD ..... haha.. cool beans !

Keep up the good work.. *heads to chapter 1*
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 03:11 am (UTC)
NO DON'T I NEED TO KNOW IF URU GETS TO KAI (T__T)!! No pressure, JUST KIDDING, (I can be patient LOL!) I really wanna know though ...

Thank you for coming to read my story though, it's a nice feeling to have one of the people whose stories I liked reading mine as well! (^__^) *happy!*

Yeah, Yutaka will have a "mental growth" of his own during this journey, lol!

Takeru and Yasuno, those two, so complicated ... (^_^)

Thank you for your wishes, and thank soooooooooo much for commenting, really happy *hugs and kisses*

PS ...I'll be PATIENTLY waiting for updates of into the night (^_^=)
[info]pooobaihr wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 03:53 am (UTC)
Well, I am working on the sidestory (threesome) at the moment... And Uruha is getting punished for.. disobeying Ruki... hehehe >:D Look out for that one.. Its going to be called, "The Delightful Punishment" xDD

Well, I cant wait to get to the rest of the story.. (wanted to save the other chapters for another day) xD... :)
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 11:36 am (UTC)
Finally get to reply you ... fiu! after the reply I gave you the other day, I suddenly became hectic, GO FIGURE!

3some (`ー´) you say ... I. AM. WAITING. (^_^;;) Oh! did I just day that ...

Don't worry, absolutely take your time, in reading, stories are better when enjoyed (-_^)
Thank you again for consedering this fic! love!
[info]doralice_29 wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 12:59 pm (UTC)
I finally get to read this!!!!
(srry I've been busy...)
Well this is definitely an interesting story... *nods nods*
So.. untypical and really... amusing...
*goes to read the other chapts*
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 01:02 pm (UTC)
No problem dear, don't apologize.
Take your time in reading, hope you enjoy it!!
thanks for commenting hun!
[info]keimaxwell wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 06:00 pm (UTC)
Hmm~ I most definitely like this and am really looking forward to the next chapters. The quite detailed sex scene so early on surprised me a little, but it nearly let me forget my meal. XD
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 11:00 pm (UTC)
I am very glad that my story caught your interest! *happy happy new reader!* So I hope you'll enjoy the rest and the soon to come!
Aaaaaah Takeru and Yasuno, look what you've done! LOL!

Thanks so much for commenting, I really appreciate it and give you *hugs and kisses*
[info]gratiela wrote:
Aug. 4th, 2009 07:43 pm (UTC)
*bites fingers*

.. and then i was at work and busy...
the internet connection failed me..
BUUUUT i DID save it so i can read it without being bothered!
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Aug. 4th, 2009 08:13 pm (UTC)
*worried* LOL!

Hope you enjoy it hon! (I was save stuff too, no matter how much I love pc and stuff ... too unreliable)

Thanks so much for commenting hon, gives you tons of *hugs and kisses*
[info]gratiela wrote:
Aug. 4th, 2009 08:31 pm (UTC)
I'm worried too :D - But about what's going to happen to Kai in this story!

(i have to go check out half of the "characters", lol.. i only know gazette, kra and alice 9.. and lol, of course i heard of gakt*
... AND I JUST remembered: i peeped a little bit at chapter 5: OMFG HOTTTTTnesss.. Ishihara was .... *is slightly dead*)

I'll continue reading tomorrow - my eyes are getting sore already :(

*gives you more cookies*
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Aug. 4th, 2009 08:54 pm (UTC)
Yeah ... Unfortunately, you are right to be worried about what is going to happen to Yutaka *nods head in shame*

AHAHAH, glad you seemed to like ch.5 from the peek you had LOL! (-_^!)

No problems, take your time, and I thank you very much for reading and commenting, really appreciate it!! *hugs and kisses*

*gratefully takes cookies*
[info]musicadio9 wrote:
Oct. 28th, 2009 12:01 am (UTC)
i REALLY LIKE this story!! so different from ANYTHING i've read!!

hey, you know what, THIS COULD TOTALLY BE A PLAY. a verrry dirty play a jrock play.

i LOVED how the dog's names were tora and saga (otp)

poor, poor, innocent Kai . . . comin from a small town . . . *sniffles*

SPEAKING of 18th century, i had a dream the other night that i was sleeping on a bed of hay, and apparently it was quite comfy and warm (though i cant imagine how . . . ) then i was galloping though a town and cutting off everyone's heads (or attempting to . . . ) LOL

we shall see how this unfolds! very well done!
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Nov. 1st, 2009 05:17 am (UTC)
*CLAPS* meeeeen I am happy, *nods* yup so much so!!!
I am glad that you seem to like it so far, and I hope the rest will keep up to your expectations.

Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it and I give you a hay field which also has loads of *hugs and kisses*

...Interesting dream .. as soon as you said that the image of (don't rember his name now) but in itlian (which is my first language) is IL CAVALIERE SENZA TESTA, from sleepy hollow ..LOL!
[info]musicadio9 wrote:
Nov. 1st, 2009 09:52 pm (UTC)
ahh so how its turning out so far . . . ill comment after im done chapter 5!! (SO EXCITED)

YAY i get hugs and kisses . . . i wonder where

i used to take italian in the 9th grade!! but now i take german since i moved to a new school and they didn't have it . . .

hmm well i know testa means 'head' so . . .

you speak extremely good english and i love the way you write. very pleasant to read.

but, just some concrit, i think you should stop referring to everyone as blonde so much bc they're all blonde!! O__o!!
[info]animefan961 wrote:
Nov. 4th, 2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
The house of sin sounds very sinister :D I love the name of Reita's dogs lol. And the fact that Takeru and Yasuno were all goody goody then all hell will break lose when Kai gets to the house XD
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Nov. 5th, 2009 04:32 pm (UTC)
Yeah, they had to keep up the appearance, make your enemy think they are in a good comfortable place ... then ... attack LOL!

Thanks for commenting *kiss and hug*
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