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Title: HOUSE OF SIN - The Diary of Uke Yutaka
Chapters: 2.2/??
Author: [info]luna_no_koibito
Genre: Human drama, romance, war, angst.
Warnings:  men/men relationship, cursing, sex, violence, incest.
Rating:
from PG -15 to NC-17 (Depending on chapter)
Pairing: Revealing this might spoil the story just yet ... suggest looking at the character list (^_^)!
Bands: the GazettE, Dir En Grey, X-Japan, Nightmare, An Cafe', Alice Nine, Kra, SuG.
Disclaimer: I don't own them, and don't wish I did because I'd be sorry for what could befall them (・_・;)!
Summary: Synopsis )

 MAIN

 


CHAPTER 2 PART 1

-Kazuhiro has been acting strangely lately, don't you think, Akira? - queried Takeru, as he calmly observed the blonde in question walking towards the entrance of the gardens, followed by the young apprentice, from one of the windows in a room on the west side of the second floor of the Hayashi residence. Akira, who was holding himself on the wall next to the window, his arms folded on his chest, with Tora and Saga crouched on each of his side, slowly turned his head towards the window to glance at the same scene, and moved it back to its previous position keeping his quiet.

-He is distancing himself from us … like he is hiding something – continued the other, as he kept his gaze fixed on the blonde outside the window, who was now pointing at the red themed garden.

 

-Where have you been? - suddenly asked the nose-banded lawyer as he looked up to a blonde who had nonchalantly entered the room, and roughly dropped on the armchair next to a mantelpiece.

 

-Where I go, or what I do is none of your business, Akira. - drily replied the blonde, who was looking at him, in a slouched position, and then bent his head backwards in a seemingly attempt to catch a nap.

 

-It will soon become my business, when you'll come begging me, once again to defend you in court, Takahiro – pointed out Akira, tightly holding his teeth together, as he studied his twin, who simply turned on his side in search of a comfortable position, ignoring his brother's remarks. If it were anybody else, such behavior would have normally, and quickly, enraged the short-tempered blonde lawyer. However, his posture did not bulge, and his eyes did not glare, he wouldn't get angry at his twin brother, he knew that, even if he might have been in the deepest of wrongs, he couldn't get angry at him, or any of his siblings, and he was well aware of such fact; they were his only weakness.

 

-Tora … Saga … not now … - faintly mumbled the half sleeping blonde on the armchair, as both dogs reached for his face and affectionately liked it, with their tails quickly shaking in excitement.

 

-Takahiro, is not time to nap, we have some serious issues to discuss – stated Takeru in mock reprehension, who had abandoned the contemplation of the couple outside the window, followed by the annoyed sigh coming from the table in the center of the room, where a of a eye-glassed blond was sitting, and suddenly dropped his quill, and apathetically looked up at the youngest blonde in the room.

 

-There is a reason why there are books on the walls of this rooms, and there is also a reason why it was appositely built for my own unique use – calmly explained the eye-glassed boy with a hint of vexation – So whatever it is take it out of here -

 

-Takanori, Takanori. Aren't you not part of this family? - quickly asked Takeru in mock curiosity

 

-For some ill-fated reason, which is yet beyond my comprehension, it appears like so – drily replied Takanori, who had resignedly resumed his scribbling.

 

-We seriously should stop having this useless little meetings – pointed out Akira, looking at the seemingly saddened Takeru – … but if we must, we could pick another of the infinite rooms in the house – he then added, causing the youngest to smile.

 

-If we did so, then it would just be the six of us all the time, because Takanori will not move from here – calmly explained the youngest

 

-Hust tell us what you want already – urged Takahiro, who was now massaging Saga's belly, while stroking Tora's back.

 

-Help with getting rid of the apprentice as fast as possible, obviously … - abjectly replied Akira

 

-Wrong – replied the youngest with a devilishly looking smirk on his face. -Shouldn't you be the one wanting that anyway, Akira? You did not seem to pleased, with that thing - noted

 

-You don't want him out? - surprisingly replied the seated twin looking at the youngest, who was now as well sitting in a chair at the table facing Takanori.

 

-No. Well, that had been my initial intent, however I profoundly thought about it-

 

-You think? - quickly interrupted Takanori, while reading a passage from one of his books, as the youngest heedlessly resumed speaking

 

-I profoundly thought about it, and realized that lately, things around here have been somewhat ... static, and ... I am rather bored … so - replied Takeru, curiously observing his fingernails.

 

-So?- impatiently asked Akira

 

-I thought we should perhaps have some fun with the brunette … old style – quickly replied the youngest, as the room fell quiet. Nobody seemed to want to give a reply, when the youngest finally resumed talking – So, what do you think? -

 

- … What does Yasuno say?- inquired the seated twin

 

-He doesn't know yet, but he is always okay with whatever I say anyway. Kazuhiro may not agree, as usual, but has never objected, as he? Takanori here, I am sure doesn't even care, and Kazamasa doesn't understand anyway- swiftly replied Takeru

 

-Whether or not Kazamasa understands, we still cannot discern … - pointed out Takanori, never looking up from his book, as his hand continued jotting notes.

 

-Whatever- snapped the youngest blonde - So? - he then hastily inquired excitedly looking at both Akira and Takahiro

 

-I am in – laconically replied Takahiro, as he shoved his nose with Saga's

 

-Do as you please Takeru, I have no time for such things anymore – replied Akira getting off the wall, and kneeling to scratch behind Tora's ears – just don't kill him, I don't think I could defend you in a murder case – concluded the blonde lawyer, as Takeru rolled his eyes with a pout in response.

 

-You must really hate the poor guy though … - remarked Takahiro, who was now massaging an extremely pleased Saga.

 

-Not really, in the end, he is like all the others – swiftly replied Takeru assuming an emotion-less tone – Coming here thinking they know it all, when they know absolutely nothing. They have no idea what we have been through … what we are still going through. The pain, the loss, the mistrust – cynically smirked Takeru -Yes, because we can't trust anybody, not even the general and his whore -

 

-I have told you too many times already, to mind what you say, Takeru – strongly admonished Akira -they are still the people, who gave birth to you … -

 

-I could care less, especially of her … is not like she cares about me anyways, does she now? - asked Takeru in a tone, which was understood that didn't need any answer, as Akira helplessly stared at the youngest.

- … I will not allow anybody come and destroy what we so desperately and arduously built. Nobody. - strongly stated Takeru, wearing a chilling expression as he intently stared at nowhere. - which of course, also includes our oh so dear lady Ayaka ... she will soon be gone too- he added with the same cold stare.

 

-That may not happen, Takeru– commented Akira, as he worriedly watched the youngest raising from his seat, and directing himself to the exit

 

-Oh, just wait and see – cheerfully replied the younger -now I have to go and join her back in the new tea room. I told her that I absolutely had to see mother for I was in dying need of her oh so endearing embrace, and she gave me her permission, with those oh what sweet boy eyes.- laughed the youngest blonde -women … - he then whispered as he almost exited the room, but stopped hearing the old pendulum clock ticking eight o'clock

-Oh, and I would like everyone together for dinner … you too Takanori! - added Takeru – we need to give the impression of a normal family, even if the general and … her majesty, will not currently be able to attend. Then, see you all in a while – concluded the blonde, finally exiting the room.

 

-Can't wait … - excitedly exclaimed Takahiro

 

-You should find something better to do with your life, other than playing around with a sixteen year old – remarked Akira, looking at his twin

 

-Drop. My. Case. Akira. - strongly replied the other – I am not Mr. Smart like you, I don't believe in justice, and will not fight for this stupid country – nonchalantly replied the other, making the other slowly hyperventilate in a successful attempt to keep his cool.

 

-Are you saying … Are you really saying that you just intended spending your entire life, doing absolutely nothing from morning until night? - finally exclaimed Akira, in light frustration

 

-Aah there it goes again! The renowned telepathy of twins' brains, a miracle I tell you … - readily replied Takahiro as he got off his chair – you should definitely take some time into such studis Takahiro – he then concluded swiftly leaving the room followed by Saga, as the nose-banded blond irritatedly hit the wall besides him.

 

Releasing a resigned sigh, Akira slowly stood up from his still crouching position, and as he walked towards the exit, followed by Tora, he stopped by Takanori

 

-Do you still intend to leave? – inquired the elder

 

-I was never meant to be here in the first place – drily replied the younger. Akira simply smiled at the busy-head, and playfully ruffled his hair, while Tora placed his forefeet on the younger one's lap with his tongue sticking out, as Takanori massaged in between the dog's ears, still maintaining his gaze on his papers.

 

-If it makes you happy - calmly added Akira – Are you ... coming for dinner? - he then inquired in feign curiosity.

 

-As if. I will ask one of the servants to bring my food … as always – replied the younger

 

-You are aware of the fact that if you do not show up, Takeru is going to be angry at you, which means … - noted Akira as he bent a little closer to the younger

–he will disturb you incessantly for at least a week or so ... a whole one week of wasted study … - pointed out Akira, at whom the younger quickly glanced in apprehension

-You shall have absolutely no peace, like when he found out that you did not show up for his birthday last year, remember? which by the bye, I would highly recommend you to go to this year. - continued the nose-banded lawyer in an amusing tone, knowing he now had the younger one's full attention, given that he had placed down his quill, while releasing an irritated sigh.

-Do you really want to be once more continuously subject to all those nonsensical questions such as “Can a woman grow a penis?” or “Can I become pregnant?” or “Can you die of overorgasm?-

 

-I shall … momentarily stop for dinner – quickly interrupted Takanori with a frustrated sigh - that idiotic brat ... he doesn't even care about anybody else but Yasuno anyway, why this?- he then hissed, furiously grabbing his quill, as Akira once more ruffled his hair in amusement for having accomplished his task of getting the other away from his books, even if just momentarily, for he wasn't looking too healthy, and the excessive study was obviously the cause

 

-It might seem so but in the end, I believe he feels like we are all that he has, and ... he needs to feel like we all believe the same – calmly replied the elder, receiving another quick glance from the younger -Well, I shall let you be – he then concluded

 

-About time … -replied the younger, receiving a smirk from the elder, as he and Tora left his studio.

 

888 --- *** --- 888

 

Yutaka and Kazuhiro had finally got back into the house, and where silently walking trough a wide corridor in the east side of the second floor, when they stopped in front of white and gold wooden double door, of which Kazuhiro slowly pushed open one of its sides, and let them both in.

 

The room was quite spacious, as the apprentice believed all the ones in the house to be. The floor was made with a light brown wood, and one big multicolored carpet had been placed in the middle of the room, and opposite them, to the far left, there was a glass door connecting to a balcony. Next to glass-door were three wide windows, all at a fair distance from each other, and they all, including the glass door, were adorned with thick purple velvet curtains that were, at the moment, tied up to the sides. To the far right, in front of one of the windows, there was a majestic baldachin bed, which was facing the left wall, the wooden part of the bed was made with an ebony looking material, and its drapes where of an artistic mixture of violet and white. Next to the bed, on the right side of the wall, was an ebony desk, followed by a yellow couch. On the left side of the wall, right in the center, was a gigantic white wooden wardrobe, and to it's right, a door that most likely took to room's owner bathroom, who was sitting on a stole in the middle of the room, apathetically facing a painting board, as he rhythmically moved his brush on it, with one hand, and held a squared paint-palette with the other.

 

-Shou, I am here, are you all right? - cheerfully asked Kazuhiro gently closing the door behind them.

 

-Shou? - confusedly inquired Yutaka in a low tone

 

-Yes, that is the only name he answers too, we don't know how he came up with though. - sadly confessed the elder blonde

-He has also gave each one of us other names. I, for example, am Bou - Explained the elder blonde, as they walked towards the blond painter.

 

-I brought a new friend with me, his name is Uke Yutaka … - tried to say the elder blonde, but the younger continued his painting unmoved in posture and expression.

 

-Good evening Mr. Kaza- … Shou ... my name is Uke Yutaka, and it is a great pleasure to make your acquaintance – introduced the brunette with a warm smile on his face, as he extended a hand, which was meant to be shaken, but was plainly ignored as the younger blonde didn't seem to have even acknowledged both men presence.

 

The apprentice retract his hand, without taking offense, and kept smiling as he got behind the blonde, in order to observe the object of the painting. As he studied the drawing a sudden blush covered his face realizing what was being portrayed. The background was a night sky, full of stars, and a half quarter moon at the upper right side of the drawing-board, drawn with unbelievable accuracy in every detail, such as the embraced naked bodies, of two blonde men, of whom only the back of one, the head and wrapping around arms of the other, could be seen.

Kazuhiro then noticed the reddened expression of the apprentice, and hurriedly spoke

 

-Lately … this two men are a constant subject of his paintings – he calmly explained – but we don't know who they are, for as you can see, their faces are always left blank … and it might seem like they are ... - nervously concluded the elder blonde, at which Yutaka simply replied with a node, as he continued making notes in his head.

 

-However – suddenly spoke the blonde with a jollier tone - What is so astonishing, is the quality of his drawing, they look so … real – added Kazuhiro absently staring at the drawing -... for a person, who has never once received drawing lessons.

 

-Impressive … - replied Yutaka, as he fixed his gaze on the peculiar square shaped palette -This is the first time I have ever seen a squared palette … - he then observed

 

-Yes, I believe it would be. This was made appositely for him – sadly replied the elder blonde – The regular palette is naturally rounded in shape, and some of his unexplainable tantrums were cause by his continuous attempts to place the curve edge of it, in perfect alignment with the straight edge of his table -

 

-Unexplainable tantrums?- attempted to asked the brunette

 

-Yes. The first time he finished using it, he was ten by then I believe, he decided he was going to place it on his desk, and as he kept trying to align the two sides of the palette, we tried to tell him that it wasn't possible, but he would simply keep going, never acknowledging anyone, with this same cold expression of his – sighed Bou as he gently stroked the painter's hair.

-Subsequently, during different times of the day, we would keep stopping by his room, and there he was still attempting his impossible task. During his pursuit he hadn't eaten or even drank, thus, scared that he would starve himself to death, Yasuno attempted to remove the palette from Kazamasa's grip, and it happened- sighed the blonde as he paused

-… he screamed as loud as he could, while furiously hyperventilating at the same time, as if in excruciating pain, or as doctors would always end up diagnosing him, possessed. - bitterly smirked the blonde

-Then, once he had regained control of his palette, he suddenly ceased his cry, but began to forcefully hitting it on the edge of the table, we believed, in an attempt to perhaps smooth its edges, but he was hitting the object insanely hard, and it inevitably broke a part, with him impassively staring at it, trying to put the pieces together – explained the blonde.

-Yasuno would always immediately send one of the servants to buy new once, but the same thing would happened over and over again, until the day when Akira went and buy a wide flat piece of wood, and spent an entire day constructing this squared palette. That day, was one of the few days we have ever seen Kazamasa smile – concluded the blonde warmly smiling at the still indifferent painter, as he kept his stroking movements of the younger one's hair.

 

The apprentice, who was silently taking in the story, had already an insane amount of questions he wanted to ask, for it was indeed the first time he had heard of anything such as this, and had absolutely no intention to dismiss it in mere case of possession

 

-If I am correct, you had previously stated that this was part of some of his unexplainable tantrums … what are the others?- attempted to ask the brunette, to whom the other replied with a nervous smile, while still gazing at his younger brother with eyes that seemed to be drowning in sorrow.

 

-Shall we first go and have dinner? It's getting late, and I am sure you must be hungry Mr. Uke – suddenly replied Kazuhiro – … You could continue tomorrow, if you don't mind – hesitantly proposed the blonde.

 

-Most certainly – promptly replied the apprentice, with a tone of disappointment

 

-Are you hungry Shou? Shall we go to eat now? ...- gently asked the Kazuhiro, still stroking the younger blonde's hair

 

Kazamasa suddenly stopped drawing, and affirmatively replied with a slow nod as he got off the chair, and slowly walked to his desk, under the scrutiny of the apprentice, who was observing his every move. While Kazuhiro, had gone to the check for a vest in his brother's wardrobe, the younger placed the palette at the edge of the table, making sure that both edges were aligned, and then placed the brush straight across the middle of the palette, were Akira had appositely carved its space. He then walked back to his drawing, and as he attempted to lift the whole stand.

 

-Let me help you with that – readily offered Yutaka as he rushed to his aid, at which words Kazuhiro swiftly left his search, and hurriedly turned around

 

-Mr Uke! do not- tried to warn him Kazuhiro, but it was too late. The brunette had already reached the younger blonde, and in doing so he accidentally grazed the back of the younger blonde's hand, who suddenly dropped the painting, and with a terrified expression, frantically began rubbing the touched spot as he kept horridly staring at nowhere.

 

-Shou!- yelled Kazuhiro, as the younger dropped to the ground, while the elder rushed to join his brother on the floor, carefully embracing the younger from behind. Kazamasa's body was violently rocking back and forth in his brother's embrace, eyes still panicked and gazing nowhere, and soon, what was just a rub, became a scratch, and the scratch became so rough, that the spot began bleeding as the skin was being roughly thorn.

 

-Stop it! Shou, please stop it! - begged Kazuhiro as he held the blond even tighter, trying not to touch his hands, which Yutaka was about to reach, with the intent of stopping the younger.

 

-Do not! - quickly screamed the elder blonde, startling the brunette, who promptly stopped on his tracks – do not touch him, anywhere he is not clothed, he will become frenzied, … and this is nothing compared … to what I have witnessed him do to himself – added the elder blonde, as he continued trying to calm down, the agitated body in his embrace, while Yutaka was helplessly observed the scene in evident stupor.

 

-I-I am m-mortified -he tried to the express brunette, words choking in his throat.

 

-everything Is all right Shou, … just stop ... please – at those words the younger suddenly ceased, and turning to slowly hug the blond around his waist he spoke for the first time that day, as he slowly chanted the same word, over and over again – Sorry … sorry … sorry-

 

-It is alright Shou, it is alright … it is not your fault- confirmed Kazuhiro, gently rocking the still chanting, and now sobbing body.

-Now let's get up and go and eat alright? - gently asked the elder, as Kazamasa slowly stopped crying, and nodded, while still chanting his sorrys.

-And stop apologizing, it is alright – reassured the eldest as the both got up, under the stupefied and powerless eyes of the brunette, who wanted to help them up, but was scared of accidentally touching the younger again.

 

-Please do not mortify yourself for what had just happened. It was my fault, for I should have warned you in the first place – quickly stated the blond with a friendly smile -I keep forgetting your not one of those doctors, whom would have never lifted a finger to do anything else other than jutting notes – he then explained

 

-I-I still am, tremendously sorry – deeply bowed the apprentice, whose heart was finally starting to regain his regular pace. He then rushed to open the door, as the two still embraced brothers walked towards it, receiving a smile and a grateful nod from the eldest. He then gently closed the door, and silently followed behind them the couple, with the eldest still professing words to reassure the younger, that everything was alright, and that it wasn't his fault, at which words the apprentice seriously began to think whether it was really going to be alright. This was indeed his first time having to deal with a person such as Kazamasa, and he suddenly wondered how was he going to deal with someone, whom he couldn't touch, and that barely spoke? However, the thought was swiftly pushed away as he stopped to think about a more imminent problem. He was soon to dine with the whole Hayashi family, thus, with Akira and his recently discovered clone, and the brunette had a strong feeling that the nose-banded lawyer wouldn't have been far from pleased at the sight of Kazamasa's injured hand.

CHAPTER 3 PART 1

A/N: I know it might seem like it is going slow, but I really really don't won't to leave out any single emotion, or detail, that might help in understanding the way they feel or they perceive situations. So I apologize for that, hope you enjoy this chapter, and thank you so so so much for reading. Much love, and happy 4th of July to all the American readers!

 

 

 

 

Comments

( 22 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]kawasakininja wrote:
Jul. 4th, 2009 05:44 pm (UTC)
Meeting the rest of brothers was such a pleasure. Every one of them has a very distinctive personality, Takahiro seems extremely lazy but I loved his sarcasm -Aah there it goes again! The renowned telepathy of twins' brains, a miracle I tell you … -. Takanori was amusing workaholic genius. Kazuhiro actually seems like the only honest out of the bunch. I would also say only caring, but I think that would be a lie. Maybe the only one openly caring. Because it seems they all do care in their own way. Akira is obviously very protective towards his brothers, he also strikes as very intelligent, the way he talked Takanori into having dinner with them. I really like Akira, he is my most favorite character once again. Also Tora and Saga are actually very lovable, when they are not intimidating poor Utaka :))) I find it unusual how they let Takeru order them around, or maybe they just don't want to be bothered with him, so they let him do as he pleases. He really is the most spoiled child. His plans for Utaka make me scared. And I wonder about their whole situation. It almost seems as Takeru is trying to protect all of them, the bond they seem to share. I don't know if I am giving him too much credit. Kazamasa, I wonder what illness he suffers from. I wonder will Utaka be able to help him.
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 02:50 am (UTC)
I couldn't wait to finally bring them all out myself, I was actually unsure whether to make them all have a single encounter with Yutaka, before the dinner, but I opted fro this instead, just to keep it as natural as possible. I was debating on that choice, for the simple fact that I was trying to portray the differences in behavior of the different characters, thus I am glad that you think I was able to properly characterize them.
Kazuhiro has reached his limit poor thing, but has no idea of how to proceed from there, thus he is really going to rely on Yutaka quite a lot ...
Most of them will not admit it, some will fight quite, and others have unusual relationships, but they do in fact care for each other, because they had all indeed made through all of it this far ...(trying hard not to insert spoilers, sorry!)
Akira is a very deep character, and yes I had intended him to be his brothers protector (I am so pleased and shocked that I have being able to express what I wanted to express, given that you are catching the sense of the story so well, You are making me immensely happy, you have no idea!). Tora and Saga are really loving and adorable around the seven, is like they feel their emotions.
Takeru is indeed spoiled, and the others do not see themselves as being bossed around, but are as playing with their youngest brother, who they probably pity for reason ... that you'll soon find out about (^__^) Takeru does care about his family, and we will see the evolution of such emotions, and you are certainly not putting to credit on him, not at all ...
To tell you the truth, I am wondering myself if Yutaka can cure Kazamasa ... we are here reviewing his notes, and googling LOL!

Thank you so much for always commenting, I appreciate it a lot, and really hope not to end up boring you!
give you *hugs and kisses*
[info]eglinton_w wrote:
Jul. 4th, 2009 06:33 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much for update ^_^ I was waiting for it. So many characters, you made my head spin. Too happy to write a proper comment ))) need some time to calm down * dancing happily*
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 02:51 am (UTC)
Aaaaaaw I feel so honored!
*joins you in your happy dance*
[info]eglinton_w wrote:
Jul. 4th, 2009 09:35 pm (UTC)
Sooo… we finally met Hayashi’s brothers. All of them have such unique personality that feat them so well. And they also blend together so well. Because at first I thought that they wouldn’t be so caring and protective of each other. I had an image of cold family where siblings are only communicate with certain member of the family, that they only going to fight and argue with each other, which happens when if you people with such strong personality in one place.

And I like how Niikura justifies Akira. I knew that he’s not one of those simple characters that have no depth in them. The way he acted with Kazamasa and Takanori shows him as a caring, loving and clever person and you can rely on. I believe that in family he acts like a shield, protecting his brothers from harm. And the same goes to Akira’s pets )))

The other character who’s not as plain as it seems (well in this chapter anyway) is Kazuhiro.
It must be hard to be him. He seems like a black sheep in the family, not only he feels the need to act how he acts to meet mother’s expectation but also he’s the one who cares not only of his family but other people as well.

It’s so amusing that Takeru is bossy, he’s like a little copy of Yasuno))) And I’m not surprised that he can annoy the hell out of anyone.

~“Can a woman grow a penis?” or “Can I become pregnant?” or “Can you die of overorgasm?” ~

What a curious child XD

~ He is distancing himself from us … like he is hiding something~

Hm… Now I’m the one who’s curious.

~ -I thought we should perhaps have some fun with the brunette … old style ~

Poor, poor Uke but in the same time my perverted side can’t wait to find out what Takeru is going to do. I wonder if Yasuno is going to be involved.

Takanori, Takanori, Takanori… he’s a little bit cold here and cynical. But I think as all Hayashi family he’s more complicated as it seems. And the same goes to Takahiro although he’s bored and sleepy here ^_^

Well that was long))) Sorry *blush* Can't help myself. Everytime I read your work I have so many emotions ^_^

Can't wait for more
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 03:01 am (UTC)
Yeah, they do kind of act like that, like Takanori not wanting to go for dinner, or Takahiro not listening to Akira, but if an outsider tries to get in their world they do become pretty protective of each other, thus yeah ... they are pretty close in the end (believe me, there will be fights...)(-_^)

Perfect analysis of Akira and "my dear" dogs, can't say more to that part of the comment!

And about the analysis you made about Kazuhiro "It must be hard to be him." it is indeed, and you'll soon find out ...

AHAHAH. Takeru is surely a handful, the problem is that he knows what he is doing, but doesn't reason correctly when threatened ... I feel for you my dear Kai, I feel for you.

Takanori and Takahiro have two different types of internal conflicts, what more can I say without saying more (・_・;;)

And don't worry about length, I love LONG comments, so I love this, and I am also so honered to know that I give you all this different emotions, really thank you sooo much! many *hugs and kisses*
Thank you for commenting as always!
[info]yutakai wrote:
Jul. 5th, 2009 08:21 am (UTC)
Thanks for this great chapter ^^
It was interesting as always.
And many questions have been raised for me...
For example the scene on the fountain...I really would like to know more about Kazuhiro and the reason why he acts like a girl.

And then Takeru...what is he planning oO
Poor Kai...what got he into?

I'm really looking forward to the dinner.
It's like a "gathering of the sins". Let's see what you put out of this XD

and then the whole thing about Shou. On one side I'm so sorry for him. On the other hand it is very interesting to read about his behaviour.
I hope Kai will find I way to help him.
But I have to ask you something.
How did you came up with the idea of the palette? That's an amazing thought.

The other thing I loved is your description of the house and the gardens. If I close my eyes I really can imagine this places.
You've got my highest respect therefore ^^

I don't have to say much about your writing.
Great as always ^^

greetings <3


[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 11:54 am (UTC)
m(_ _)m APOLOGIZE FOR LATE REPLY! suddenly got busy! FINALLY I can get to reply!

Yeah, the fountain has a good piece info regarding the history of the Hayashi family, and about Bou ... gush girl, you always seem to predict the next chapter! LOL (-__^)!

I can agree with you on that one ... poor Kai.

Oh dear, a part for Takeru, who is a natural entertainer, I am pretty sure that the others will no fall less ... (^__^)!

Aaaaw thank you so much! Well I researched thing about his illness (like I do with every other real fact, just not to give you false info!) and got with this idea, but I won't tell you more because I don't want you to figure out the illness yet.

I was hoping someone would mention that garden! (-_^) really fif put some time in that, wasn't sure it had come out the were I envisioned it in my head, but I am glad you seemed to have seen it as well, yey!

And once again, you are too kind, with the compliments about my writing, thank dear! and gives you looots of *hugs and kisses*

[info]karol_uchiha wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 02:02 am (UTC)
Heey ! *o*~~
I loved it XD Again.
Finally I saw Shou-kun *-*~~ And now I'm worried about him x.x"~~ Poor kid Ç_Ç ~~
But I really liked this chapter XD The characters are singular and I think there's more to come right? XD~~
I'm so curious! @_@ I want to know how's gonna be Akira's reaction to Shou's injuried hand and what Kai is going to do XD" And @_@ How Kai is going to deal with Kazamasa and Takeru! XD I mean he has a really difficult task and there's still Takeru to make it even harder Ç_Ç"~~
Poor Kai XD"
Ohh I LOVED Akira XD He's my favorite character I guess XD I mean he's really cool @_@
I loved the fact that he seems to be a cold person ho doesn't care about anyone, but he does care about his brothers XD And I can see it clearly now! *-*~~ I thought it was amazing XD
An Kazuhiro is sooooooooo cute @_@~~ I felt sorry for him, he must have a difficult life Ç_Ç he seems to be very tired of all this @_@
And Takanori is hilarious XD I wanted to laugh but I couldn't 'cause everybody is sleeping here Ç_Ç" And I don't want to wake them up XD~~ But I really liked his personality and I know there's mooooore to come *---*~~ right? @_@
Ohh well sorry if my english is too bad XD But it's really late Ç_Ç" and I'm sleepy XD Sorry.
But I had to read and to comment it! XD
Waiting for the next chapter XD And don't worry about the time, 'cause the history is worth it o/~~
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 12:05 pm (UTC)
again ... m(_ _)m APOLOGIZE FOR LATE REPLY! suddenly got busy! especially to my devoted reader!

Yeah, I feel sorry for Shou-kun, and I really hope Yutaka can do something! and of course my dear, there is more to come!!!

Akira, Akira, AKira ... we shall see ..(^_^) and yes Takeru is definitely not there to make thing easy, he doesn't even know the meaning of the words easy ... i think ...(^__^!!)

Yeah Akira seemed to have one quire some hearts, I guess he feels like the right impersonation of justice, and protection. Kazuhiro, well, I think that tired doesn't cut anymore, he definitely beyond that by now, (^_^) and Takanori is one his own, that genius little mind has all his future objectives planned out .. or so he thinks ... (^__^) [AHAHAHAH Don't want people to get mad at you because of my story ... shhh. it's ok (-_^)!]

And girl, don't worry about your English it was just fine! I understood everything you said, and hope you don't do like me, and get to catch regular hours of sleep!!!
Thank you so so so much for commenting, as always, hope I won't let you wait too long for the next chapter, and give lots of *hugs and kisses*!!
[info]mesti wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 11:56 am (UTC)
sorry for late commenting m(_ _)m

whoaaa...poor, poor yutaka-chan XD hmm...takeru planned something for him...be careful, kai XD

and akira...he's really sweet and caring towards his brother ^^ aww...now i see the gentle side of him :D

your kazuhiro and kazamasa...i totally love them <3 but, shou's drawing...i have a bad premonition about this. what's happened to shou? his past? i'm curious~...curious~~...

i hope you not get bored of reading this: you made my day. you really did <3 thanks so much *hugs*

sorry i cannot give a proper comment..i blame diphenhydramine *is sleepy*
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 6th, 2009 12:14 pm (UTC)
Don't worry dear, because I just go to reply, actually so I am kinda late (got suddenly busy (^_^)!

Yeah about Yutaka ... I really hope he survives this, with not too many scares, or actually that he just survives it! ... (^_^)!

Hey Akira loves them all, and he had always been working to maintain their protection, even though things had happen through the years that had made him, the angry being that he is, he will never unfocused on them ...

Thank you for liking them both, and Kazamasa, good observation about the painting, it's going to be a bit hard for him, given that he doesn't seem to be able to express things with words, and drawings sometimes can't say everything .... or correct misunderstandings ...

Girl believe CAN'T GET TIRED OF COMMENTS, for they are my best BOOSTERS, so don't worry! whatever it is you feel just say it, even if it a simple good! I will still reply to express my appreciation, especially to something so sweet as making you day again, lol! score 2 for me! (-_^)! So don't worry about proper comment, AND GET SOME REST!! (^__^;;) (look who's talking ...)
Thank you so much for commenting, gives you lots of *hugs and kisses*!
[info]pooobaihr wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2009 02:22 am (UTC)
Ok, Ive made it... Now... Hmmm.. the twinz are an amusing pair .. heheh..... and Tora and Saga xD.. cute

Takeru, Hmmm.. I wonder about him... is it because they figured that he would be a girl that he feels so.... eh.... They must have really wanted a girl to have treated him so coldly.... (Im guess this is why he acts the way he does..)

Takanori lol.. hehehehe.. I LOVE HIM! xD as always.. xD...

Kazamasa ... I think he's autistic. He seems that way anyways.. My youngest son is autistic and he used to do alot of what Shou seems to be doing. Only thing he still does now is.. NOT TALK.... and.. tries to keep things straight. Its funny because when he eats, He pulls the plate and drinking up to the edge of the table and it has to be that way before he eats or he'll have a fit. but.. Shou seems to have the more extreme case of it... lol.. but .. this is just my opinion.. hehehe

Great chapter.. Im glad I caught up.. Now.. I cant wait for the dinner scene~!
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 7th, 2009 06:44 am (UTC)
They are amusing, even though they end up fighting most of the times, and Tora and Saga I think their just adorable too!

Takanori is unique, and I am glad u like him (^__^)

About Takeru and Kazamasa, ... man I wish I could tell you and answer you properly, but for this point in the story I don't want to give you out spoilers.

Yup the dinner seat, I think it might get interesting ...*evil look8 JUST KIDDING.

Well thank you so much for commenting dear and I give you lots of *hugs and kisses*
[info]k435y wrote:
Jul. 8th, 2009 05:58 am (UTC)
LOL. I still laugh at the mention of Saga and Tora. XD

they were his only weakness Awww...Ruka.

-For some ill-fated reason, which is yet beyond my comprehension, it appears like so – LOL. Taka~ That's something I don't understand either. He's somewhat different from the others. But then since they all have something to brood about...that's probably one of the ties he's got with the family. XD

-We seriously should stop having this useless little meetings – pointed out Akira, looking at the seemingly saddened Takeru – … but if we must, we could pick another of the infinite rooms in the house – he then added, causing the youngest to smile. Awww... I love how they all...indirectly...care about each other. LOL. That was cute.

-I thought we should perhaps have some fun with the brunette … old style – O_O!! Oh, dear. *quickly hides Kai in a pocket*

– just don't kill him, I don't think I could defend you in a murder case – *gapes* Whatever. You know you love Kai already. XD *gets chased off by Saga & Tora*

...Wow, Takeru sure hates his parents. I think he and I will be great friends. XD Not that I hate my own parents. But I just hate the whole human race. O_O!! I mean...uh, you didn't read that. LOL.

-women … - he then whispered LOL! I know, right? *gets shot since she's female too* XD

Akira seems to be another sane person in the household...despite his temper tantrums and "murderous eyes". LOL! Man, I love Kai and his crazy imagination.

-Are you saying … Are you really saying that you just intended spending your entire life, doing absolutely nothing from morning until night? - What the hell's wrong with that? XD

“Can a woman grow a penis?” or “Can I become pregnant?” or “Can you die of overorgasm?" LOL~! Ah, Takeru...the little nerd. That's cute though.

such as the embraced naked bodies, of two blonde men ...Yasuno and Takeru! I bet Shou chanced upon them one night. XD Just kidding, but wow... LOL.

until the day when Akira went and buy a wide flat piece of wood, and spent an entire day constructing this squared palette Awwww... Can I kiss him? XD

Akira and his recently discovered clone Ruka the Clone. LOL. And yes, Akira will most probably have a fit about Shou's latest injury. It seems like he really loves Shou. And poor Shou... I wonder what happened to him.

Please update soon. =)
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 01:57 am (UTC)
I am sorry if it didn't seem clear in my passage, or maybe I wrote it wrong, but that weakness, is Reita's
m(_ _)m.

Hahahahaha, Life is funny in a very distorted way, and there had to be a black sheep in the family, and sorry my dear Takanori, but you won the Faith lottery, welcome to life!

If you can, keep my poor Kai in that pocket, better faith ... (T_T)!

It is, but they would solve so many problems if they were open and direct ... so many problems would be avoided, because they do love each other ... (;;_ _)
did I just say too much ...?

Ahahahahahah, You do like Reita x Kai DON'T YOU! I don't know about Saga, but Tora would definitely on his butt.

Believe me I won't shoot you, I am a girl too, but there are a lot of girls in my black book, so many, but my memory is not that good, I wonder ... was she on it ... brb ...LOL!

HURRAY DOING NOTHING! IF I CAN BE SUPPORTED WITHOUT HAVING TO WORK FOR IT ... HELL YEAH! never gonna happen for me though (T_T)!

Takeru is just a master in bothering people, he should find a profession that has something to do with that, since he still undecided, but then again he is still 16, soon to be 17 though ...

(!!_ _) hai! I didn't read that ..LOL!

Yeah Kazamasa, who exactly are you drawing? ... I am curious too (^_^??)

Yeah, go ahead, that was a very kind act, he deserves a kiss!

I would like for Akira, to give Yutaka a brake at least for dinner ... but then again it is Akira ...

I'll try my best too update as soon as I can, I am working on two fics at the same time, as soon as I finish ch 9 of this I'll be immediately on 3 of this one.
Thanx for your comments, they are always so appreciated, gives you *hugs and kisses* and runs, to finish reading her fav fic, and finish writing hers!
[info]k435y wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 02:15 am (UTC)
Let's see...how should I go about this? I do love ReitaxKai, but I adore ReitaxUruha just a bit more. And since Uruha isn't even near...England (I had to lock him in a pretty box. He was throwing fits because he and Reita weren't getting enough love as a pairing from fanfic authors--including me. XD), I'm supporting ReitaxKai. XD

It's fine if you take your time updating. It's always worth the wait. XD
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 03:09 am (UTC)
I see, (I agree with him, he doesn't really get much love with his pairing ... can't really talk myself though, uh? LOL!)

Thank you for the support (-_^)
[info]doralice_29 wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 01:54 pm (UTC)
Takeru is like a... little devil X3
Plotting against Yutaka made me LOL XD
This story is really, really nice...
idk but I had the strange feeling that the two men painted from Shou are Takeru and Yasuno...
Maybe he discovered them doing it and they didn't notice...?
<.<
Thx for sharing!
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 02:40 pm (UTC)
AHAHAHAH little devil! But isn't he a pretty one though? LOL

Aaaw I am glad you seem to like it as much, and hmmm .. who knows who the men are ...

You are welcome dear! and thank you so much for commenting. gives you lots of *hugs and kisses*
[info]keimaxwell wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 07:41 pm (UTC)
I don't think of this as slow, but rather very detailed and that's the writing style I prefer, actually. This is getting more and more interesting what with the dark secrets of this family lurking in the shadows, or so it seems to me.
[info]luna_no_koibito wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 11:06 pm (UTC)
Thank, there comes a relief! I like details a lot to so I can't refrain!

I am glad your interest is deepening, makes me feel accomplished! *oh so joyous*!

Thank you for commenting again, lots of *hugs and kisses*!
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